Sixty-Eight…

Sixty-Eight: Wrath

Contains harsh language, POV switches, nudity. Seriously, there are a ton of F-bombs in this one. I apologize to always be using that word, but it’s needed in this one since things get out of control…

“Let me in or I’ll break the fucking door down!”

“Vaclav, I’m telling you. Now is not the time. You don’t understand.”

“Open it.”

Hunter rubbed his head. “I can’t open the door right now.”

Kat slipped beneath the bed.

If Dad finds me, I’m dead.

Vaclav punched the door in. It flew across the bedroom.

He stepped inside.

God, Kat thought. Please don’t find me!

She heard her father’s footsteps. It was only a matter of time before he looked under the bed.

Shit! I think my feet are sticking out!

Quietly, Kat edged backward.

Oh, no!

Vaclav strode across the floor, dangerously close to the bed.

“Kat? Are you in here?” A few seconds later he called, “Hunter? Where the fuck are you?”

Kat’s heart stopped.

Oh, God…

“So help me. You better not be underneath here,” he muttered.

Displaying a horrible look on his face, he peered down at her feet.

“Dear God. You really are down there.”

“Sorry, Dad.”

He stood back up. A low rumbling came from the adjoining bathroom. Like a growl.

“Hunter?”

Curious, Kat rolled over to look.

In an instant the door flung open.

Hunter stood behind it. In his other form.

“Okay,” Vaclav said. “You want to play this game?”

Hunter snarled.

“Come and get some, you hairy fuck face.”

“Here doggie, doggie.”

Hunter crept toward him, then lunged.

“Wait—stay. Stay!

Hunter plowed into Vaclav and knocked him to the floor.

Kat watched them, disbelieving what was happening.

“Kat! Get some blood before this thing tears out my throat!”

Hunter growled as he wagged his tail, pawing at Vaclav’s face.

“Hurry up, goddammit!”

She tossed open the fridge and struggled to find the blood.

Shit! Where is it?

Finally she found it. Kat raced back to the bedroom.

Stunned, she dropped the pack on the floor. Blood exploded.

Hunter nipped one side of Vaclav’s neck, and then worked his way to the other side.

The beast bit down. His head wrenched back and forth.

“Hunter! No!”

Now he was facing her and baring his fangs.

“It’s me, Hunter. You remember me. I’m Kat.”

She took a step back, nodding at the blood on the floor.

Please. Just drink the blood.

She glanced at her father.

Thankfully he managed to get up. He would be okay, despite that huge gash in his neck.

He glared down at the wolf.

“Don’t you dare fucking hurt her.”

Kat’s gaze altered between her father and Hunter.

Hunter tentatively approached her.

The blood. Drink the blood, her mind pleaded.

The wolf lowered his head near Kat’s feet. Then he lapped up the blood.

Relief enveloped Kat. But it wasn’t over yet…

Hunter shifted back.

“You need to leave,” Vaclav told Kat.

“Why?”

“Don’t argue with me! Just leave!”

“Okay!”

She exited the room but lingered around the corner.

Whenever she felt brave enough, she peered in.

Why did you turn into a wolf?”

Hunter pulled out a dresser drawer, rummaged for some clothes.

“I forgot my injection last night,” he said. “I’m sorry. I fucked up.”

Hunter started dressing.

“That’s not the only thing you fucked up on.”

He spun around and headed for Vaclav.

“If you’re fucking my daughter, I’m going to fuck you up,” Vaclav warned.

Suddenly Hunter called Kat’s name.

He turned. Using one finger he beckoned her. Kat looked at her father, and then ventured back into the bedroom.

“Uh, yeah?”

“I love you, Kat.”

Uh-oh. She nervously glanced at her father.

Hunter grabbed her and pulled her in for a hot kiss.

Instead of closing her eyes, she watched her father, along with the expression of anger on his face.

Anger that was swiftly simmering to a boil.

“Okay. You can GET YOUR FUCKING PAWS OFF MY DAUGHTER NOW.”

“You can’t control her for the rest of her life, Vaclav. It doesn’t work that way.”

“It works that way in this family. And I swear to God I’ll kill you if you touch her again.”

Glaring at Vaclav, Hunter reached out and touched Kat’s arm.

Dread overcame her. She knew they were going to go at it… at any time.

For what seemed like hours, the two vampires glowered at each other.

And here they go.

Both shifted to fighting stances, fists poised.

“What’s wrong, Hunter? Still hurting after losing Aubrey?” Vaclav mocked. “Foolishly trying to replace mother with daughter?”

Hunter threw a punch.

Stifling panic, Kat fled the room and raced to her mother’s bedroom.

“Mom, wake up!”

“Dad and Hunter are fighting!”

Aubrey rose from the bed, her eyes wide.

Their fight had escalated. Bloody lacerations marred their faces.

Vaclav swung, Hunter ducked. Then Hunter clocked him on the jaw. For a moment Vaclav reeled.

Once recovered, Vaclav reared back and drilled Hunter in the gut.

He doubled over.

“Stop fighting!” Aubrey yelled. Neither man acknowledged her.

However, it was already over.

“Are—you okay?” she asked as Hunter walked by.

“Terrific,” he mumbled.

Vaclav passed his wife and daughter without speaking one word.

He collapsed on the living room sofa.

Kat went to her bedroom. The audible sounds of her parents’ fighting drifted from the other room.

“You and Hunter both need to be locked up!” her mother raged.

“Hunter needs to be locked up for screwing our daughter!” her father ranted.

And sadly, Hunter never even touched me.

Kat stood up and got dressed. Soon nighttime would come.

When it did, Kat was startled by the slamming of the front door.

“Hunter!” she cried. “Where are you going?”

He didn’t answer. Just kept walking toward his car.

“Hunter? Why won’t you answer me?”

She didn’t know what was worse. The silence or the sad look on his face.

“Kat, I don’t know if this can work between us.”

“What do you mean?”

“You know. It’s Vaclav, it’s the fact that I’m too old for you, it’s… everything. Not to mention I almost hurt you earlier.”

“No,” she sobbed. “You said you loved me just a few hours ago!”

“I do love you, Kat.”

“Then why?”

“I told you why.”

“I’ll be staying at a motel, but I’ll come back to give you your treatments.”

Oh. Well that’s a load off.

“I hate you, Hunter.” Nausea rose up inside her. She heaved a few times.

His right arm curved around her, tugged her close to him.

“Everything will be okay,” he softly said.

“No it won’t. It’ll never be okay.” Her body trembled next to his.

Kat couldn’t watch him leave. She went back into the house.

CC credits go to Tifa for the facial wounds, and LadyFrontbum for the wound on Vaclav’s neck. Depressed poses were created by Simul8rReviews via MTS.

Thank you all for reading as always.

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50 Responses to “Sixty-Eight…”

  1. No Hunter, don’t leave!

    Ah, V. “wait- stay. Stay!” haha never underestimate the big bad wolf…he’s bigger than you…and better..

    • Stay. Stay Hunter! Stay! Don’t Leave Kat all alone to face the wrath of V! Or give her the address to the motel you’re staying at…so ya know..they could..uh ..meet up!

      • hahaha, I can tell you really liked that part. I did too. πŸ˜› LOL you’re funny! Probably sooner or later she’ll find that addy anyway! XD

        <3333 πŸ˜€

    • **EDIT: this is in reply to your top post, lol. WP messed it all up again…**

      I know. Sorry about that. You know me, I always have to put drama in my stories. >.>

      haha, did ya find that part funneh? :p Anyhow, yeah, the big bad wolf is bigger and more fierce than V. (even though, in a way, V. won the fight) O_O

  2. omw tht was amazing one of the best chapters ever! I dont want Hunter 2 leave Kat 😦 hey btw fyi im back its me tami πŸ™‚

    • Hi Tami! I figured it was you! Glad you’re back! πŸ˜€ πŸ™‚

      lol you know how I am with my crazy stories. My characters always break up. πŸ˜› Maybe someday they’ll get back together, but I can’t promise. XD

      Once more, I’m glad to ‘see’ you again! ^^

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  3. ‘Come and get some, you hairy f*** face’
    I actually laughed out loud at that XP lololol XD
    NOOOO! Don’t go! *cries* 0.o
    Hunter looks kind cute as a wolf lololol 0.o
    @theliifeofapetal: When I read your post, I thought you said ‘the big bed wolf’ and got extremely worried lololol XP

    • hehe, V. was feeling brave at that moment. It didn’t last long though. Glad you found it funny! XD Personally I really liked the ‘stay, stay!’ part. πŸ˜›

      He does look cute as a wolf. There’s just something about black wolves that are so pretty. Then again, the white ones are cool too. πŸ™‚

      LOL, the big ‘bed’ wolf. XD

      Thanks for commenting! <<Wow that sorta sounds lame. O_o

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      • lol I liked that part too ^_^
        I loves wolfs πŸ™‚ they are epic ^_^ Except when they’re attacking you lol
        Don’t worry, I say that kind of thing all the time XD Everytime someone comments, I’m like, ‘OMG YAY! Thankyouthankyouthankyou!’ πŸ˜€

      • hehe. It was pretty comical. ^.^

        Oh, me too. Definitely epic! They’re like my fave animals. I especially love them in Fantasy. ^^ Well yeah, except when they’re attacking you. XD
        Glad I’m not the only one, lol. Aww, well it’s nice to get comments. πŸ˜€ In fact I need to go to your blog and comment on it, lol! πŸ˜›

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  4. Stay Hunter Stay! πŸ˜† V cracks me up and he did for the whole of this chapter

    I dont want Hunter to go 😦 I want him and Kat to be together 😦

    V = Bad for beating up Hunter, shouting at Aubrey and begin a dick!
    Hunter = Bad for fighting V, becoming the wolf and leaving!

    I think this chapter had to be my fav, all the tension, love, fighting, comedy

    You did a GREAT! job ! πŸ™‚

    • hi James. πŸ˜€ haha, you liked that part too? Yeah, he tried to be brave at first. XD

      Aw, I’m sorry. You know I always must do that crap at some point in my stories. πŸ˜† But maybe it’ll all work out.

      True, true. Vaclav was being an ass to everyone, basically. :/ And yeah, lol, Hunter was being somewhat irritating as well. πŸ˜› Poor Kat. 😦

      Thank you James. I did get a lot of that good stuff in it (or tried to), so glad you liked it. πŸ˜€

      Thanks again! *hugs*! ^_^

      • *hug* πŸ™‚ I really did like it…I mean who couldnt πŸ˜€

        Yeah, has to come sooner or later, but I think I have an idea of whats going to happen next *shifty* Not sure yet but πŸ™‚

        And Kat, is she really that stupid hiding under the bed! I mean that is the first place everyone will look! *sigh* Silly Kat!

        Yeah, hope it does all work out ever though I am loving the drama!

      • Aww thank you. πŸ™‚ *blushes* lol

        Uh-oh. You have an idea of what might happen next? Hmmm. Now I’m doing the *shifty eyes* haha

        Yeah, true. I guess it was just the first hiding place she spotted. XD Also, maybe V. smelled her (vampres are like animals with their sense of smell… at least I think LOL). πŸ˜›

        Yay! Thank you James!! I’m on 73 right now and having a blast writing it. A lot going on in that chapter! πŸ˜€ mwhahahaha

      • πŸ™‚ Thats okay πŸ˜€

        Hehehehe yeah I do πŸ™‚ But I’m not going to say, unless it happens πŸ™‚

        Yeah very true he may have been able to, and its still silly there were some perfectly good windows to jump from πŸ˜† or even hide in the bath or shower πŸ˜†

        Ooooo! Good cant wait for more then πŸ™‚ And yay!!!

      • πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

        Oh, I can’t wait to find out if you were right or not! I’m curious!

        Yeah, true. But if she would’ve went to the bathroom, Hunter would’ve followed her in there and turned into the wolf! XD Wouldn’t have been good if that happened and Hunter ate Kat. LOL.

        Like you said, she also could’ve jumped in the shower and hid there. :p Actually that would be excellent, because she could’ve told V. she was showering and to leave her alone.

        Thanks!! hehe πŸ˜€

      • Hhehehhe πŸ™‚ Well when the next few chapters are up I will tell u if things are going the way I thought.

        LOL! Kat eats Hunter that would’ve been some crazy shit! πŸ˜† πŸ™‚

        Yeah, that may have been more convinsing than…hiding under a bed πŸ˜† but there is one issue why Hunters shower πŸ˜† thats what I’d ask if I was V

        Your welcome!

      • OK, cool! πŸ˜€

        πŸ˜† you mean Hunter eating Kat? πŸ˜› Actually that sounds dirty. I’ll stop there. >_> But yeah, that would be crazy shit!

        A lot more convincing indeed. Kinda reminds of this show I used to watch as a kid, where the people were always hiding out in the shower. It was hilarious. The show was ‘Three’s Company’. :p πŸ™‚ Sometimes both the guy and a woman would hide behind the shower curtain, but with their clothes on of course.

      • Hahahahah! Ooops mistake there πŸ˜† Yeah I did mean that but now it sounds wrong…. O.o

        And never heard of it but sounds weird, anyway not long and next chapter !!! πŸ™‚ Cant wait!

      • LOL, don’t feel bad. We all do it. Sometimes I make boo boos in my stories, and catch them either at the last minute…. or not at all. *shudders*

        Does sound wrong, but… lol. Maybe not so wrong, either. XD

        You’ve probably never heard of it because it was a show from the 70’s and 80’s, lolzers. You probably weren’t even born until the 90’s. πŸ˜›

        Yep, chapter 69 is on the way!! πŸ˜€

  5. Yes! That dog got it hiney kicked. hehe… not to say I don’t like that character. But it was too funny how V reacts to Wolf-version Hunter. I guess the battle was pretty even, when Hunter changes. He got V pretty nasty. I really enjoy this story, despite all the drama, action and nudity *coughs*, there is room for humor.. LOL “Kat, you’re really are under the bed” hahaha…
    Kat reminds me of a cat in heat… soo soo desperate to get laid. πŸ˜‰ Must have taken you a while to get the shots just right. Thanks to all the great people out there who create poses. Makes writing more fun.
    Awesome update… like I say in my SP commentary… so much fighting, and nobody is thinking about the kids anymore… wuahahaha… well V is a bit over thinking.

    • Aw poor Hunter! But I know what you mean. lol V was ready to fight wolf man at first. True, Hunter injured V. pretty good; could’ve been a lot worse though. V. was lucky. O_O Of course it’s not like I’m going to kill off one of the MC’s anyhow. XD haha, *cough* nudity *hack* indeed! Seriously though I’m glad you like it and enjoy it. ^^ You have a great story yourself, Jed. πŸ™‚ And yeah, gotta have some humor. Comic relief is always good! Yeah, that was a funny part too, where V. looked under the bed and found her, then acted surprised yet horrified. Yep, Kat’s hormones are going crazy. Next thing ya know, she’ll be raising up her shirt (like on Girls Gone Wild lol) and showing her goods to Hunter. OK I’ll stop now. *ahem* Anyway, oh hell yes it took me forever to get that ‘scene’ just right. Ugh! Sometimes Sims 3 just doesn’t give a writer enough to work with! Thank God for some of those new poses, though. Oh, that’s weird, I just read further in your post and you mention poses. O_O Like you said, thank goodness for people who make those! Makes it more fun and a lot easier too.

      Thank you Jed! LOL, true. But fighting is what makes stories even MORE exciting!! hehe! As for V, he just needs to get over himself and realize that Kat’s growing up. LOL it happens sooner or later! Then again, maybe if her BF was someone other than Hunter… well, ’nuff said. πŸ˜€

      • Oh, I can totally see Kat doing that “girls gone wild thing”. She’s so in heat. LOL I think V would like to arrange marriage for Kat.
        Thanks for stopping by at Spellbound… I wanted to have something posted by the last weekend… but the story I planned out didn’t look right and there was really no progression in the actual plot… so I thought ‘nawww this is weak’. And now I’m all stuck. Great!
        Which brings me to my question. Do you have things already played out for Bloodlust, like little story boards of what you will have in the next chapter? Or you just let everything flow as things happen? I know have a rough outline with where I’m gonna take Liam but I feel stuck on the details. I keep thinking… that’s too much give away… or that’s not necessary… or that’s too early to say…

      • Yeah. I mean, sure she wouldn’t do that to total strangers (lol) but would to Hunter. πŸ˜› Oh, that’s so bad….

        hahahahaha, I think you’re right! V. really would! Then again, he’s so possessive he probably wouldn’t even do that! He wants Kat to live at home forever. XD

        Aw, it’s no problem. I love that story. πŸ™‚ so you have the dreaded writer’s block? Maybe you’re just being too hard on yourself. I’ve made at least a FEW chapters that didn’t really progress the plot on my stories (and plan to do more, like unneeded sex scenes XD). I think as long as the scene is interesting or funny, it doesn’t really matter whether or not it progresses the story, IMO. If you’re too picky on yourself, you WILL get writer’s block. That’s why I’ll never write any more novels, they’re more trouble than they’re worth, and just not fun anymore because of all the ‘writing rules’ and shit.

        Yeah, I outline nearly everything before I do each chapter. It just makes it easier on me. Then when I’m stuck, I go back and read it again. It’s best to write down your ideas anyway, so you don’t forget. I do this for all the main plot points, and then anything minor (usually) I let those flow into the story as I think of them. All I know is, you don’t want to give out too much info too early in the story, just let it progress more naturally, if that makes sense. And just slowly reveal things as time goes on with each chapter. That keeps readers guessing and coming back for more (not that I’m an expert LOL). But I still think you’re worrying too much. You have a great story so far, so I’m sure it’ll keep being great. πŸ˜€

  6. hahaha she hid under the bed, and he found her. i laughed at the stay part lmfao they got into a huuuuge fight. awww no hunter don’t leave!!!
    bad hunter bad, no, stay! lol
    oh and btw i put the downloads into the packages folder like i’m supposed to and my other mods work so i don’t know whats wrong i can’t find either sims anywhere

    • LOL, V. could probably ‘sniff’ her. You know how vamps are and their sense of smell. XD hehe, glad you liked all those funny parts! πŸ˜›

      haha, that’s exactly what Kat should’ve said to him! So funny! πŸ˜†

      Aw, Alyssa I’m sorry about that. I wonder why they’re not working?? Whenever I have time I’ll try to upload them to the dreaded exchange. Maybe then they’ll work. :/ I’m pretty sure I don’t have too much cc on them. IDK. 😦

      • it’s weird lol i have all the expansions and all the stuff packs so it doesn’t matter πŸ˜› lol, i’m going to try and get them to work, haha you don’t like the exchange, and i would have laughed if Kat said that to him hahahaha

      • Well I hope you can figure out what the problem might be. I’m no expert on downloading and computer crap, unfortunately. :p sometimes I have issues with downloading stuff. Usually I don’t, but it’s disappointing when I do.

        Rambling again… >.<

        Anyhow, nope I don't like the exchange. Sometimes you get bad cc from there. πŸ˜›

        LOL I should post a pic of Kat, with a caption of her saying that to Hunter. That would be funny. XD

      • i havn\t been able to figure out what’s wrong yet hahaha, i have no idea whats wrong x.x you might have to upload it >.< and i agree i hate when i have troubles downloading, yeah sometimes you do get bad cc from there especially when it's something from the store! lol,

        hahaha you should post a pic of that!!! that would be epic

      • Oh, noes! OK, I’ll upload them soon… :p Maybe within the next few days? Sorry, I’m lazy and slow whenever it comes to uploading sims to the exchange! πŸ˜› You’d better give me a rec when I do this… πŸ˜† just kidding. πŸ˜›

        I really hate it when I download an awesome outfit, and go into the game and it just can’t be found anywhere! Ugh! -__- As for bad cc, I used to get those alien toddlers. I always wondered WTF? Then finally people started realizing the cause of it. I used to think it was a glitch with the actual game!

        I’ve heard of bad store content too. I cannot believe EA would sell shit like that! @.@

        Yes it would! Maybe sometime I’ll have time! πŸ˜€

      • hahaha oki lol that’s fine i’m patient πŸ˜› hahaha rec? sorry i feel like a noob hahahahaha, omg me too!!! damn alien toddlers lol, :O there’s bad store content?

      • There is one thing I forgot about… I have to ask the orginal creator of Vaclav for permission to upload him. I don’t want to tick anybody off, lol (seems to make people more mad if you re-upload to the exchange). Hunter’s fine though. Oh, no, I was just joking about the rec. Don’t worry about it. It’s just something that people do for uploaded stuff. πŸ˜› You’re not a noob, lol. Yeah, I used to get those alien toddlers a LOT. As for the store, I think there’s a dress on there that if a sim wears it, her leg turns invisible or something? Not sure.

      • oh yeah lol, i’m sure they will be fine with it though, most are if you ask hahaha, yeah they do seem to be more mad but usually only if you don’t ask hahaha, at least Hunter is a for sure go lol, i’ll do the rec if you want hahaha :P, wow what a weird dress!!!

      • Yeah, I doubt she’d mind either. I will ask her soon, it’s just I had major issues with my game today (lol) and had to get that straightened out. Then I lost some of my cc and had to get some of that back too.

        Nah, you don’t have to rec them. πŸ˜› You’re sweet though!
        Very weird dress. I’m glad I never wasted any simPoints on it! Feel sorry for the people who did, though… 😯

      • oh that sucks i hope you got everything all straightened out and everything! aw why not? i want to rec πŸ˜€ lol, omg me too i would be so mad if i did that

  7. Aha I loved this!
    Hunter really is irritating, I don’t blame Kat >.< Make up your mind, Hunter!;P
    Vaclav – what a badass. He sure does put up a good fight;D

    • Aw, thanks!

      I know it. Poor Kat. Hunter just finished telling her he loved her. 😦 The asshole. :p

      Oh, yeah. Just makes V. even hotter, lol. ^_^

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  8. Somehow when Hunter told Vaclav that now was not a good time, I knew he was going to change into wolf form. Silly Vaclav should’ve listened, and then not antagonized the wolf. Clearly something he’s learned after uttering “No wait! Stay! Stay!” Which made me laugh my ass off.

    I’m kinda torn between Hunters actions. I was so proud of him for admitting his feelings for Kat in front of Vaclav, and then pissed when he decided to leave. I suppose Hunter doesn’t know what to do with himself either, he loves a girl whose parents hate him and who he shouldn’t touch until her birthday.

    Perhaps he’s just leaving until then. Until she is considered legal. Then he can finally whisk her away.

    • haha, you figured out the clue! Silly Vaclav indeed. I think I laughed my ass off while writing that part. O_O Sometimes I really do laugh at my own crazy shit. But anyhow, V. definitely should’ve known better. What did he expect? Did he think Hunter would offer his paw to ‘shake’? LOL.

      I don’t blame you for being pissed at Hunter. He bowed out a little early in the story. 😦 Then again, it was best he leave since V was there. He just didn’t have to dump poor Kat… you made a lot of good points about him. So it’s pretty difficult on him too.

      Aw, that sounds so romantic, about him maybe waiting until she’s older to ‘whisk’ her away. ^_^ Only time will tell if that’s how it turns out, though.

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      • LMAO. “Come one doggie, shake a paw. Good boy” that’s so hysterical to imagine.

        I’m not pissed. He’s in a very difficult place right now and yes, having Vaclav there does not help. Aubrey he can handle, but not Vaclav, and especially not both together. I think mostly because he himself believes what he is doing is wrong.

        Did he dump her? He never said he was leaving her, just leaving the situation. Although I can see Kat thinking that he’s leaving her.

        Hmm… only time will tell if Kat and Hunter will be together? Didn’t you say in some comment that you always pictured them together? Now you’re changing your mind? That or you’re trying to keep possibilities open / keep readers guessing.

        I’ll just wait and see I suppose.

      • It is, isn’t it? πŸ˜› It’d be cool to post a pic like that too, and a funny caption. Hmmmm….

        Yeah, he is in a difficult spot for sure. Glad you’re not ticked at him. :p Once again, a lot of good points. You pretty much hit the nail on the head with all of those comments. Hunter does know it’s wrong, but he also knows you usually can’t choose who you fall in love with. >_>

        Well, I guess ‘dumping’ is a strong word, lol. Maybe didn’t entirely ‘dump’ her, because Hunter’s in a state of indecision. He wants to do the right thing, but… yeah. You know how when you’re in a relationship and things get too difficult to deal with, so you take a break, make a decision of what to do later? Kinda like that. Sorry to be vague, lol. And yes, to Kat it totally spells the ‘end’.

        Oh, well I only pretty much said ‘time will tell’ because I didn’t want to give away any future happenings, lol. So yeah, just trying to keep readers guessing. πŸ˜›

        hehe, sorry for the suspense. πŸ™‚

      • Wow… how did I spell on wrong? I’m a talented one.

        … anyway! No you can’t, and how could I ever be mad at Hunter? He’s just a big bad fluffy sucky wolf *said in that voice you use when talking to kids*. Mind you, the “sucky” part sounded wrong even in my head! Lol.

        I know exactly what you mean and I figured that’s what Hunter would be doing for the most part.

        Oh god yes. Teenage girl hears I’m staying somewhere else and all of a sudden the world is ending.

        Lol, well we need to keep the reader’s guessing! It’s very important. I’m not being sarcastic, as sarcastic as that may have sounded. I know guessing is important, I actually need to do it in my story a little more often. Also, I need to add suspense πŸ˜›

        Btw, I’m totally stoked for the next chapter and wondering how and where Xeri will come into play. >.<

      • lol, I swear to goodness that I never noticed! I didn’t know what you meant until I looked at your other post again! O_O

        hahaha, lol that’s hilarious, ‘big bad fluffy sucky wolf’ indeed! You get to see how bad he can be in chapter 71, btw. πŸ˜› Actually, some readers might really get mad at him then…. and yeah, the ‘sucky’ part does sound a little… uh, yeah. πŸ˜† *giggles and snickers*

        lol, so true about the teen girl thing. I remember being that age, and how horrible it was. Couple that with being over-emotional anyways, and you have a ticking time bomb. LOL.

        Oh, no I didn’t think it sounded sarcastic or anything. Just makes for a better story, if people don’t know what’s gonna happen. Although I have a bad habit of giving out clues, haha. Well it’s hard to get so much stuff packed into a story (like suspense, romance, etc.) I try to get suspense in mine whenever I can, but a lot of times I get stuck on doing the romance.

        Yes, I meant to tell you that Xeri gets her debut in a couple of days. πŸ˜€ Hope she’s to your liking. I also have a little plot wrapped around her character. I also hope you don’t mind who I have her hooked up with, lol. Actually, I kinda think you’ll LIKE who I have her hook up with…

      • Lol, well then we’ll pretend I never spelled anything wrong ^_^ Yup that’s right!

        Oooo I’m intrigued! See you have suspense even in your comments! Lol. Aww poor Hunter, always giving the readers a love / hate relationship with him. I’m sure I’ll still adore him no matter what. Yeah I snickered at that too as soon as I wrote it.

        Pretty much. Good thing so far with Kat is that at least they’re little explosions. Well… for now.

        Lol, it’s sooooo true! I love writing romance. I have two great plots for both my stories romance wise, and I’m no where close to being able to write them. They just happen too far away 😦 Oh well. Gives me time to perfect them.

        I know!! I’m SUPER excited!! I’m sure she will be. Oooo, she gets her own little plot? That’s so nice of you! Hmmmm…… now I’m even MORE curious!!! … can I have a hint?? Like is it someone you’ve already introduced??? Nah, actually don’t tell me. I wanna find out the hard way… *snickers* That’s so NOT how I meant it!

      • That’ll work. I’d edit your post, but then our comments after that wouldn’t make sense. Of course if you want me to edit it, I will. It’s no problem either way. πŸ™‚

        haha, I never thought of that. That’s a cool thought. I still give away too many hints though. :p Yeah, Hunter does something pretty bad, but there’s a reason why he does it. Things happened to him in his past that he doesn’t want to happen again, etc. >_> I bet you did laugh at that, that is so funny. πŸ˜€

        Yeah, Kat’s handling things pretty well so far. If it were me as a teen, I’d be throwing and breaking stuff. πŸ˜›

        So you like writing mushy stuff too? XD I have since I was a teen. LIke you said, at least that gives you time to perfect your stories. It was tough for me not being able to write romance after chapter 49. O_O But at least I can now.

        Hahaha I can totally tell how excited you are about Xeri’s debut!! You won’t have long to wait now…. in fact I’m going to publish the next chapter VERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRY shortly… mwahahahahaha. πŸ˜€

      • Nah don’t edit it, it’s all good.

        It’s POSTED!!!!!! *goes off to read after feeding her ever pestering cats*

  9. Kat should just find out which motel he’s at, and well continue where they had left off the night he left…hehe

    • lol I could smell perversion all over your post (as soon as I glimpsed the first few words haha). πŸ˜† But yes, she should. Now I’m ready to do a little side story on my Sinfully Bloodlust blog. jk. XD

  10. lol! I laughed out loud at the dialog between Vaclav and Hunter! Here doggie, doggie. Stay! πŸ˜€ Hunter sure has a lot of guts to confess his feelings to Kat and kiss her in front of her father. Ouch! No wonder there was a big fight. I wonder what will happen now…so much drama! On to chapter 69!

    • Cool, you made it to the wolfie chapter. This is one of my fave chapters of this story, lol (even though I wrote it myself… ). You weren’t the only one who found that part funny! I laughed as I wrote it! XD Hunter definitely had balls to do that in front of V. Poor Kat felt uncomfortable though. Hunter shouldn’t have put her on the spot like that, really.

      Yup, plenty of drama!

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